This is a very good and reflected text Rabiya! The reason that this text is reflected, is because you manage to elaborate on why poverty is increasing and what we can do in order to prevent it, by giving examples on how we should strategize in order to prevent it, a statement supported by the quote that you mentioned. At the same time, you could maybe have mentioned more on what we as people should to to prevent it. After all; one of the reasons for the amount of poverty in the world, is because of the inability to use and split the money in a prioritized way. But as mentioned, you have been able to reflect upon this as well. Therefore this is a reflected article which brings up very good points!
This is a very good and reflected text Rabiya! The reason that this text is reflected, is because you manage to elaborate on why poverty is increasing and what we can do in order to prevent it, by giving examples on how we should strategize in order to prevent it, a statement supported by the quote that you mentioned. At the same time, you could maybe have mentioned more on what we as people should to to prevent it. After all; one of the reasons for the amount of poverty in the world, is because of the inability to use and split the money in a prioritized way. But as mentioned, you have been able to reflect upon this as well. Therefore this is a reflected article which brings up very good points!
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